Saturday Art

Look! A revision!

A few weeks ago (I think) I posted this:





I got some feedback from some other illustrators and revised it. Now it looks like this:





In the first picture I hadn't decided on the attitude of the larger dog (was he excited? Scared?). But I figured it out and drew him with a feeling in mind. I haven't gotten an official critique yet but I will this week.

(Sorry that my scans are so crappy. I do this late at night and am always too tired to try)